Saturday, March 24, 2007

for all the men.

for all the men
who stared at me
who tried to touch me in my private parts
who tried to rape me

from the time
i dont remember
from the time
i dont even know
what womanhood is like
from the time
i dont know
my breasts would bloom;

i wish i could stand nude
on a point at a hight
where you could all see me
and mastrubate,
mastrubate, mastrubate.

i could show you
how my ass shakes,
how my breasts wave.

but then,
you'll be over with me.
you'll want every woman,
every other woman
to do this for you.
if they dont,
you will drag them
from your own households.

no, it might not save any woman.
it might just trigger
gang mastubations
and gang rapes..
for things you just need some excuse.

you, motherfuckers.

9 comments:

sudeep said...

I didn't really like the "motherfuckers" line, despite it packing some punch.. It's a problem with the word itself, problem with the common saying of "not being able to tell one's mother/sister.." that gives an impression that anyone who's not mother or sister is "open" to whatever..

paul on call said...

nice, some small shocks.
REALLY.

Ravi Shankar said...

Brillent! The write-up is really filled with PUNCH! Keep it up, honey.

Soumya said...

loved it..

mother fucker n all..

the imagery.. of the mountain top n the nude woman.. of all the nude women.. and of all the hungry men..

loved it..

i wouldnt have dared.

Soumya said...

loved it..

mother fucker n all..

the imagery.. of the mountain top n the nude woman.. of all the nude women.. and of all the hungry men..

loved it..

i wouldnt have dared.

Zorba said...

true to the core.


kudos.



i am yet to figure out whether it's a prose or a piece of poetry - but whatever it is, it came from the pain. and that makes it real.


even commenting through merely some words would make it bit damp.


keep it fresh. edgey and honest.



keep walking.

aryakrishnan said...
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aryakrishnan said...

< not all the men dear! Or is 'man' itself the manifetsation of violence and stupidity? >

Sobi said...

On : ( Vagina experience sharing... My name is clitoris.. & For all the men )


couldnt read much than some perverted thoughts expressed in english ...

otherwise, in essence, its the same one have seen in the toilets of trains, lifts, ... expressed by frustrated and sick minds...

both evokes the same bad taste ...

Have no idea since when have writing vulgarity considered to be bold and daring ???

Thank God ! Majority are not the so called "bold and daring " otherwise the world would have been really stinking of them...